This novel is not bad, but feels not authentic or like AI written. It was good at start but as i read the way it was written made it awkward to read for me. The character also feels very shallow and rigid.

MC who is so good at the beginning is now a dog on a leash despite him already achieving Admiral rank and now to ensure that the three admiral is the as canon Author remove MC's admiral position in the one of the most idiotic way and what annoy is that author didn't even hint if MC will make a comeback on his own or is MC waiting for the leash that the five elder has on him loosen so he can be an admiral again MC for now has lost power on the marine and his only consolation is that he can hear five elder's meeting which is con than pro if he retain his rank and maybe only regain power when canon start which means Author probably can't think of any creative ideas anymore

The pacing and writing is good is just too bad that the MC is a pushover, a loser, an hypocrite and a lapdog.

finally a fanfic that i really want, I really want a op fanfic that was at the marine and the same batch as akainu and kizaru, please don't drop and keep updating, I'll be rooting for this work

i like the story and the writing is good and all but for how much longer is he going to be the governments lap dog for? so far he hasn’t changed a single thing about canon just letting everything play out the same, so why was he even born back before canon if all he is going to do is be a good lap dog and not even change anything ?

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The work is good, it was well developed and was reaching very good condition. But from chapter 48 something changes that was super unnecessary, this error made me want to stop reading it. The story had a lot of potential, and since the author did not correct that error, this must be a translation and not an original.

its pretty good. the writing feels a little weird, pretty sure its gone through an ai or grammar program. the fights are fun to read, and i personally like the lightning devil fruit even though some find it generic. id read if ur bored, the only problem i see really is the author messes up some characters and the timeline. but its not horrible.

The beginning was really good but the chapters like 30 plus should have just been a time skip to Luffy era

The novel seems to be promising, I liked it. Can’t wait for more chapters!!!