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Siuuu
SiuuuLv41yr
2023-12-28 23:02

This novel is not bad, but feels not authentic or like AI written. It was good at start but as i read the way it was written made it awkward to read for me. The character also feels very shallow and rigid.

One Piece: Ragnarok

Ragnarok98
4.3
142 Chs

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Ragnarok98
Ragnarok98Author

Well, my mother language isn't English, so I used AI for editing ,sorry for the inconvenience, I will try to make it better in the future.

1yr
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mow
mowLv4

The issue with using AI to edit grammar and such makes the dialogue feel very meh or robotic in a sense.

Ragnarok98:Well, my mother language isn't English, so I used AI for editing ,sorry for the inconvenience, I will try to make it better in the future.
1yr
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theonlyjesus
theonlyjesusLv2

Just read the ff if you want else just scram off.

1yr
2
Victor_7740
Victor_7740Lv14

It’s constructive criticism lol. I mean he’s providing advice for the author to improve in the future instead of just saying the novel sucks outright. U don’t have to get so offended

theonlyjesus:Just read the ff if you want else just scram off.
1yr
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Isaiah_Warner
Isaiah_WarnerLv4

is this a harem, I hope not

Ragnarok98:Well, my mother language isn't English, so I used AI for editing ,sorry for the inconvenience, I will try to make it better in the future.
1yr
2
DiabloRedfox
DiabloRedfoxLv14

retards nowadays can't even understand what constructive criticism is, his only 2 braincells are probably fighting for the 3rd place

theonlyjesus:Just read the ff if you want else just scram off.
1yr
12
theonlyjesus
theonlyjesusLv2

Well thank you. I bet you would have expected me to lash on you. I wrote that comment just for fun 😁.

DiabloRedfox:retards nowadays can't even understand what constructive criticism is, his only 2 braincells are probably fighting for the 3rd place
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1yr
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Gabriel_Menard
Gabriel_MenardLv1

Bonjour auteur, je cherche le nom du roman original qui m'intrigue. Quel est son nom ? Aussi, merci pour ton merveilleux travail ! J'adore lire tes chapitres chaque soir 😁

Ragnarok98:Well, my mother language isn't English, so I used AI for editing ,sorry for the inconvenience, I will try to make it better in the future.
1yr
1
MrSimo
MrSimoLv14

he's just giving constructive criticism you fool

theonlyjesus:Just read the ff if you want else just scram off.
10mth
1ndig0
1ndig0Lv3

Mate, even the summary of the story is blatantly AI.

Ragnarok98:Well, my mother language isn't English, so I used AI for editing ,sorry for the inconvenience, I will try to make it better in the future.
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