I like it, Mr. Shane. I see a lot of hate for a certain love interest but Savannah is on top(FIGHT ME IDC). I hope you keep the plot of the MC moving onto bigger and better things going as I would love to see other cool inclusions. Only problem I have had is Fiona as a love interest but it seems you have already noticed and corrected. I do recommend maybe rewriting some of the earlier weird Fiona stuff but that’s just me. I see a lot of simps for Fiona so it’s probably not a big deal for them. Don’t have anything else to say besides the fact that I have no idea where the story is going but I’m still excited for it. :)
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