Hello book author here, and I would like to say a few things. First, I started writing this story so that it would be a kind of continuation, to a story that was (most likely, since the last update of it was 2 years ago) abandoned by its author, and I really liked that fanfic, So this story can be said to have been kind of written for those who were fans of the fanfic "Starting Mission H" (currently the author changed its name), just like me. But I'm also happy that there are other people who like my story. Secondly, when I started writing the story, I didn't have a clear path to give to the script, that's why it is so confusing in the first 6-7 chapters, I will try to improve the story even more as now I have a direction for where I want the script to go. follow, so this story will be a little faster in its events from now on. I think that might be all I had to say, once again, thank you for reading this story.

It's an interesting story. I like the combination of characters from other stories, to adapt them to the environment of our MC. The development of the story is also fluid and the characters seem to have a life of their own, being the representation of what we saw in their stories. Although it still has few chapters (6 chapters) the potential is very great. I hope it continues on the right path and the author does what he likes without considering the opinion of his readers so much, so it will be much more fun and you will want to continue the story🧐👌

There are some grammatical mistakes but there will be no issue reading the story. Also a question for author: Will he get a system because in the tags there is a system tag???

Hey word of advice to you, you should remove character who really aren't that hot and pretty cuz it's just tiring for both mc and you and us cause you know how hen tai world is. Here check my list and you can remove the ones who aren't on the list cause it's just waste of your novel and too much of a headache for both you and readers cause we won’t get actual good character screen time

A very interesting fanfic, gradual without any hard bends or water. The growth of GG at 11-12 years old is especially amusing; I can imagine what kind of big guy will have to grow to 18 2-2.2 meters, about even interesting.

Author, is this NTR?

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