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Dark19
Dark19Lv121yr
2023-12-28 01:26

It's an interesting story. I like the combination of characters from other stories, to adapt them to the environment of our MC. The development of the story is also fluid and the characters seem to have a life of their own, being the representation of what we saw in their stories. Although it still has few chapters (6 chapters) the potential is very great. I hope it continues on the right path and the author does what he likes without considering the opinion of his readers so much, so it will be much more fun and you will want to continue the story🧐👌

I was reborn as a hentai protagonist [Rewritten]

Godchaos
4.6
7 Chs

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Godchaos
GodchaosAuthor

Thanks for the review, I'm trying to do my best on this fic, even though I'm not very good at writing. I'm glad you liked it

1yr
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Vince_Gregorie
Vince_GregorieLv4

Author, Is this ntr?

Godchaos:Thanks for the review, I'm trying to do my best on this fic, even though I'm not very good at writing. I'm glad you liked it
1yr
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Godchaos
GodchaosAuthor

Hello book author here, and I would like to say a few things. First, I started writing this story so that it would be a kind of continuation, to a story that was (most likely, since the last update of it was 2 years ago) abandoned by its author, and I really liked that fanfic, So this story can be said to have been kind of written for those who were fans of the fanfic "Starting Mission H" (currently the author changed its name), just like me. But I'm also happy that there are other people who like my story. Secondly, when I started writing the story, I didn't have a clear path to give to the script, that's why it is so confusing in the first 6-7 chapters, I will try to improve the story even more as now I have a direction for where I want the script to go. follow, so this story will be a little faster in its events from now on. I think that might be all I had to say, once again, thank you for reading this story.

1yr

nullvoidz
nullvoidzLv4

There are some grammatical mistakes but there will be no issue reading the story. Also a question for author: Will he get a system because in the tags there is a system tag???

1yr
Genesis1o1
Genesis1o1Lv2

Hey word of advice to you, you should remove character who really aren't that hot and pretty cuz it's just tiring for both mc and you and us cause you know how hen tai world is. Here check my list and you can remove the ones who aren't on the list cause it's just waste of your novel and too much of a headache for both you and readers cause we won’t get actual good character screen time

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Dark_Dekade
Dark_DekadeLv4

I really like your stories so please continue and I have a request for godchaos to add female characters from the anime Boku Chiisana Succubus Shimobe and Baku Ane Otouto Shibocchau zo to the story

1yr
Dimastrelok
DimastrelokLv2

A very interesting fanfic, gradual without any hard bends or water. The growth of GG at 11-12 years old is especially amusing; I can imagine what kind of big guy will have to grow to 18 2-2.2 meters, about even interesting.

1yr
Zeref_642
Zeref_642Lv4

Author, is this NTR?

1yr
Vikingo17_YT
Vikingo17_YTLv12

Reveal spoiler

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Dark_Dekade
Dark_DekadeLv4

it's really good and I hope you can continue it[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

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Lyson
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