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Tim_QQQ
Tim_QQQLv11yr
2023-12-23 09:02

i will say that the translator has fixed the very obvious mistakes (incorrect names for example). but... its still not really translated properly, more like just put through a spell check program. like yeah, u fixed the very obvious things, but it still reads like an MTL novel. you made no effort to 'correct' the very obvious chinese cultural stuff. conversations read like they are from cultivation novels. anyone who has read a decent english novel will be able to tell the difference.. anyway, its readable, and if u dont mind the chinese stuff then go for it.

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Seyitan_Odufalu
Seyitan_OdufaluLv12

Tbh the Chinese stuff is a major turnoff and slap in the face for me. I remember reading the book and struggling with how frequently the author repeated their full names in every paragraph but when I came across the dialogue, “Enough Obito, Kakashi is a genius, we are not his opponents” I cringed so hard I immediately removed it from my reading list and library😪😒 How is this fic getting more powerstones than the fic below it in the power rankings?! That one is extremely good, this one is trash.

TheWandaShip
TheWandaShipLv14

what is the other fanfic?

Seyitan_Odufalu:Tbh the Chinese stuff is a major turnoff and slap in the face for me. I remember reading the book and struggling with how frequently the author repeated their full names in every paragraph but when I came across the dialogue, “Enough Obito, Kakashi is a genius, we are not his opponents” I cringed so hard I immediately removed it from my reading list and library😪😒 How is this fic getting more powerstones than the fic below it in the power rankings?! That one is extremely good, this one is trash.
AzuraD
AzuraDLv4

do you remember the name of the other novel

Seyitan_Odufalu:Tbh the Chinese stuff is a major turnoff and slap in the face for me. I remember reading the book and struggling with how frequently the author repeated their full names in every paragraph but when I came across the dialogue, “Enough Obito, Kakashi is a genius, we are not his opponents” I cringed so hard I immediately removed it from my reading list and library😪😒 How is this fic getting more powerstones than the fic below it in the power rankings?! That one is extremely good, this one is trash.
A7_bel
A7_belLv13

Do you remember the name of the other novel?

Seyitan_Odufalu:Tbh the Chinese stuff is a major turnoff and slap in the face for me. I remember reading the book and struggling with how frequently the author repeated their full names in every paragraph but when I came across the dialogue, “Enough Obito, Kakashi is a genius, we are not his opponents” I cringed so hard I immediately removed it from my reading list and library😪😒 How is this fic getting more powerstones than the fic below it in the power rankings?! That one is extremely good, this one is trash.
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