pls pls pls i begg of you don't make it harem!!!!!!!!

I'm afraid that the author is racist, or exercises clichés, in fact the N-word appears too often, and in the last chapter he refers to the mc's mother as being Asian and therefore not being a easy mother. I continue reading for the moment, but I have an unpleasant feeling while doing so. ps: although this is the name of a member of your pharaoh family, it's really a rotten name, in fact the number of people who will find this name pleasant or cool seems extremely limited to me, you should have started place of your readers, first names like Atom, Iron, Odin... for a guy who doesn't come from a normal family it's too weird, already his real name is Kal El it's more than offbeat enough. ps2: in the chapters the mc does not at any time refer to his surprise at being in the mcu, or at being friends with jean and gwen, which is not normal in the mcu. he should ask himself the questions, it's a shame to have skipped that.

This is a white guy writing how they think black people act

Yo I’m glad to FINALLY find a story I can actually relate to🙌🏾not once have I found a fanfic with a black mc until now. I think your doing a good job too cus this is exactly how I imagine myself acting/thinking like if I got reincarnated with OP powers🤣💯this story is really good so I hope it doesn’t get dropped. & I also hope you make more stories with black mc’s 💯💪🏾🫡 Ps. If you know any other fanfic with black mc’s let me know ✊🏾

it was going pretty good till you made Sara the gf..

Reveal spoiler

the whole thing can be called a filler, there's basically no story going on only slice of life banter/talk even when a chance comes to make a nice action or intense moment/scene author throws more slice of life taking any potential out of the picture WQ 4 SofB 4 SD 1 CD 3 WB 2

of all the girl choices in Marvel.... Why did you even pair your MC with your OC (Jean's older sister), who probably doesn't even matter in a fanfiction story. There are options like MJ, Felicia and even Jean herself. Ugh...

he made it a harem in the end, haaaaah tis a sad day

MC has a stupidass name and I feel embarrassed on his behalf when he introduces himself. I only read upto chapter 47 because I thought Jean Grey would be the love interest. I liked how she was portrayed in this fic but the moment I found out she wasn't the love interest is when I leave because there isn't much to look forward to in this fic.