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MagnusAugust
MagnusAugustLv41yr
2024-01-23 17:36

Dropped in the first chapter. MC here hits someone to save a women and he immediately goes to help her up, not caring about whether the thug is down or not. Epitome of stupidity.

Marvel's Black Steel

Ozonelayer
3.8
251 Chs

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Ozonelayer
OzonelayerAuthor

Oh, sorry that my Mc is concerned with the wellbeing of a frightened woman; I’ll make sure my next novel, my Mc ignores the person he’s saving.

1yr
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_Bruh
_BruhLv13

i think he was more mad about the fact that the mc didn't make sure the grapist was down

Ozonelayer:Oh, sorry that my Mc is concerned with the wellbeing of a frightened woman; I’ll make sure my next novel, my Mc ignores the person he’s saving.
1yr
9
_Bruh
_BruhLv13

btw, is this a harem or not. i don't wanna get invested in something I'll hate

Ozonelayer:Oh, sorry that my Mc is concerned with the wellbeing of a frightened woman; I’ll make sure my next novel, my Mc ignores the person he’s saving.
1yr
5
Sylar_in_7
Sylar_in_7Lv10

harem yes

_Bruh:btw, is this a harem or not. i don't wanna get invested in something I'll hate
1yr
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Lons
LonsLv4

pls pls pls i begg of you don't make it harem!!!!!!!!

1yr

Benoit_Valtin
Benoit_ValtinLv11

I'm afraid that the author is racist, or exercises clichés, in fact the N-word appears too often, and in the last chapter he refers to the mc's mother as being Asian and therefore not being a easy mother. I continue reading for the moment, but I have an unpleasant feeling while doing so. ps: although this is the name of a member of your pharaoh family, it's really a rotten name, in fact the number of people who will find this name pleasant or cool seems extremely limited to me, you should have started place of your readers, first names like Atom, Iron, Odin... for a guy who doesn't come from a normal family it's too weird, already his real name is Kal El it's more than offbeat enough. ps2: in the chapters the mc does not at any time refer to his surprise at being in the mcu, or at being friends with jean and gwen, which is not normal in the mcu. he should ask himself the questions, it's a shame to have skipped that.

1yr
DaoistszUkcH
DaoistszUkcHLv4

This is a white guy writing how they think black people act

1yr
LazyLord
LazyLordLv14

Yo I’m glad to FINALLY find a story I can actually relate to🙌🏾not once have I found a fanfic with a black mc until now. I think your doing a good job too cus this is exactly how I imagine myself acting/thinking like if I got reincarnated with OP powers🤣💯this story is really good so I hope it doesn’t get dropped. & I also hope you make more stories with black mc’s 💯💪🏾🫡 Ps. If you know any other fanfic with black mc’s let me know ✊🏾

1yr
DiabloRedfox
DiabloRedfoxLv14

it was going pretty good till you made Sara the gf..

1yr
Mastarius
MastariusLv2

the whole thing can be called a filler, there's basically no story going on only slice of life banter/talk even when a chance comes to make a nice action or intense moment/scene author throws more slice of life taking any potential out of the picture WQ 4 SofB 4 SD 1 CD 3 WB 2

1yr
Zenos_Maxima2611
Zenos_Maxima2611Lv1

of all the girl choices in Marvel.... Why did you even pair your MC with your OC (Jean's older sister), who probably doesn't even matter in a fanfiction story. There are options like MJ, Felicia and even Jean herself. Ugh...

1yr
StankBootyEnder
StankBootyEnderLv4

he made it a harem in the end, haaaaah tis a sad day

1yr
Twasasetup
TwasasetupLv2

MC has a stupidass name and I feel embarrassed on his behalf when he introduces himself. I only read upto chapter 47 because I thought Jean Grey would be the love interest. I liked how she was portrayed in this fic but the moment I found out she wasn't the love interest is when I leave because there isn't much to look forward to in this fic.

1yr
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