Review Detail of Techno_God in Unique Gamers Travels
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The system is disgusting, the quests make the MC seem like a puppet, the dungeons make the world travel and any participation in the current world useless, and the classes also make the entire story pointless. Why participate in the world and find ways to get stronger when the system will just give it to you, it makes the entire premise of the story and traveling to other worlds pointless. The levels are fine but it should be based on skills she has and practicing to level up, that way she can get stronger faster. The MC of this novel is the system because it does everything and anyone can achieve success with it, the MC has no sense of participation in the story and can be replaced with a pig. Whats the point of picking the world and family if shes just going to be a Harry Potter wizard, you havent even explored the magic of this world.
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The whole point of you choosing Legacy was the fact it was safe. You say there are people in this world that can hurt MC? Good! That's a reason to get stronger! You just took that entire plot out at the beginning, a normal gamer system is overpowered as it is, you just shoved a bunch of shit down her throat and removed all motivation and conflict out of the story. We could have seen a story about a girl reborn as a witch with a gamer system. Using the ability to learn quickly as a gamer she could have relied on her own magical ability to become a tribrid or something. Instead, we get a story of a girl who was just reborn, because it may be dangerous we need to boost her to be the most powerful in the world before she even meets or interacts with another character in the story. With this system, she doesn't even need to leave her house, good that way she will be safe.
ArtoriaPendragon_:Or at the very least incapacitate her for long enough to find a way to kill her.
Second, her doing these dungeons and leveling to get stronger is for a reason. She will be traveling to worlds that will make her look like a bug. Even in TVD, if someone is fast enough they would kill her easily. I plan on her going to worlds with literal cosmic entities that can destroy worlds with a flick of their finger. This is absolutely nothing in the grand scheme of things.
Third, the system does give her the knowledge and comprehension, but she still has to practice these skills, and master them. Not to mention that the Wizard is simply her first class, and the probably the easiest. Future classes will be drastically more difficult to learn due to the sheer amount of power they would give her.
Her leveling right now is drastically faster than it would be if it went off her skills and capacities. As of right now she is growing at an exponential rate, only because that is how most gamer fanfics are, they grow rapidly in the beginning, and then slow down. Which is exactly what is going to happen in this one. She will get the Wizard class maxed, a decent chunk of the next class, and then slow down dramatically.
The quest rewards will also lessen by a good bit sooner or later, as the quests become more difficult. At it’s route this is an overpowered fanfiction, so you should have expected at least a little bit of overpowered aspects.
ArtoriaPendragon_:First of all, none of the actual quests are forced upon her, she does them for the rewards because why would she deny good and easy rewards?
ArtoriaPendragon_:Second, her doing these dungeons and leveling to get stronger is for a reason. She will be traveling to worlds that will make her look like a bug. Even in TVD, if someone is fast enough they would kill her easily. I plan on her going to worlds with literal cosmic entities that can destroy worlds with a flick of their finger. This is absolutely nothing in the grand scheme of things.