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troriskLv11yr
2024-04-12 08:57

-The writer is pretty good. He doesn't constantly repeat himself, he makes strong choices, he has a sense of humor without overdoing it and manages to convey the feelings he wants. -Domination by making the human cruelty of the shinobi world of the Narutoverse more "realistic" has disturbing moments... so it's interesting. -I have to remove 2 stars for character design. For me, apart from the MC, I have a hard time having empathy (understanding them intellectually and emotionally) for the characters. I don't feel any depth in them. That they all have internal goals, motivations and values that conflict with each other.

Naruto : Domination

sybife
4.9
115 Chs

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sybife
sybifeAuthor

You should know that the first part of this fic is terribly boring and with very little to offer. Having said that, it gets better after a few chapters, so lI hope you'll stick with the story until the chunin exams (of the MC, not Naruto's ones) before declaring this fic to be a waste of time. I won't go back to rewrite the first part; it's been over a year since I wrote those initial chapters, yet I never published them. However, I've now decided to revisit and complete this fanfic, for it's something I wish to keep to see how far I've come and how far I'll go.

1yr

Doppins
DoppinsLv2

This one have The best Storyline in any Naruto fanfic. 🔥🔥

1yr
Huvnn
HuvnnLv2

great as always. 🐐🐐🐐🐐

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Doom_Night
Doom_NightLv2

I need more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

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Moonhorse
MoonhorseLv2

good Start. ❤❤

1yr
rosemoon11
rosemoon11Lv1

Grammars great the MC isn't an idiot and theirs a steady stream of updates, can't really ask for more ...........................................

1yr
dammno
dammnoLv2

really love the Story so far. 🔥🔥🔥

1yr
Yfhu
YfhuLv14

I just finished reading through all the chapters there are currently. I believe this is one of storys with highest level quality on WebNovel. I would suggest it to everyone as a great read. It is well written and has characters with actual personalities. World building is also great. It is only downside is that there are sizable info dumps in some chapters though out of place and I like them myself it may not be everyone’s cup of tea but you can skip through so no harm no foul.

1yr
GLYCOSIDES
GLYCOSIDESLv4

One of the few stories where author does the intelligent thing and cuts out the boring parts. I never like chunnin exams part of a naruto fic cause its mostly unoriginal, but this one is interesting

1yr
Kancha_T
Kancha_TLv5

Your synopsis and the review was spot on! It was a bit tedious to read MC's genin arc especially his thoughts and training, they were too technical and I mostly skipped them 😅 I especially liked his humbling done by Hokage, Kakashi and Gai. Never knew Gai had it in him to be philosophical. All in all this story is worth waiting for and reading it. Keep em coming 😄

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