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TheChaosdragon
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2024-10-08 05:20

I honestly don’t like yhwach so I don’t care about the personality and goal change The only reason I read this is because I was hoping to see the almighty scrift in action in a fanfic but its not there If anyone know one where yhwach is at full power or the mc has the almighty please let me know its name

Neo Soul King Yhwach

MisunderstoodKing
4.4
31 Chs

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MisunderstoodKing
MisunderstoodKingAuthor

This is a very slow story, regarding the power of The Almighty I'm not saying it's forever gone, it would take a while to reclaim it when making this story I want it to feel like an actual journey from its ups to its downs if you get what I mean. If you wanted something like Yhwach In the MCU with all of his powers and stuff like that you might be seeing them soon or after the anime ends. It is your decision, giving the story a 3-star review for only wanting to "see" the almighty in action isn't that good of a reason, if you really want stories with it I can recommend some, although they're all not really that good at using and explaining it. If you want, you could stick around with us. to see Yhwach's journey from start to finish, that is if you want an actual story unlike certain *cough* stories *cough* you read ( Not insulting them or anything they're alright stories ) Sure, if you want action and all that you'll have to be patience with me since I like to build things up slowly. That's all I guess. Next time, if you ever review someone's fanfiction/story. be mindful since people read the review for several reasons for example Grammer, Pacing, Characters Etc. While it's alright to express you're feelings towards it. just be honest and give actual Constructive criticism that can help both the reader and the writer. That's all I'm asking.

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TheChaosdragon
TheChaosdragonLv4

I apologize It was a hastily done review I also dont like dialogue fanfics and its very slow as you said and I honestly just gave my opinion in the review Didn’t mean to offend you its not the worst I just gave my opinion as I should in a my personal review of the fic

MisunderstoodKing:This is a very slow story, regarding the power of The Almighty I'm not saying it's forever gone, it would take a while to reclaim it when making this story I want it to feel like an actual journey from its ups to its downs if you get what I mean. If you wanted something like Yhwach In the MCU with all of his powers and stuff like that you might be seeing them soon or after the anime ends. It is your decision, giving the story a 3-star review for only wanting to "see" the almighty in action isn't that good of a reason, if you really want stories with it I can recommend some, although they're all not really that good at using and explaining it. If you want, you could stick around with us. to see Yhwach's journey from start to finish, that is if you want an actual story unlike certain *cough* stories *cough* you read ( Not insulting them or anything they're alright stories ) Sure, if you want action and all that you'll have to be patience with me since I like to build things up slowly. That's all I guess. Next time, if you ever review someone's fanfiction/story. be mindful since people read the review for several reasons for example Grammer, Pacing, Characters Etc. While it's alright to express you're feelings towards it. just be honest and give actual Constructive criticism that can help both the reader and the writer. That's all I'm asking.
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MisunderstoodKing
MisunderstoodKingAuthor

I accept you're apology, everyone makes mistakes including me. I can see why people don't like dialogue fanfictions. which is why I started making the reboot/rewrite, I know you gave you're opinion. still doesn't excuse the fact that you've used the review section as a way to vent you're frustration or anything else related, look don't worry I'm not offended or sad. there are worse reviews than yours and some I haven't even commented or replied to, which is kinda hypocritical of me to only accuse or slander you. All in all, You responding and showing that you're sorry shows me that you're brave and is actually level headed unlike others. Read the reboot it's much better than the original. until we reach the part where you want to see "The Almighty" in action believe me I will do it justice unlike stories that ever feature it ( now I know I didn't exactly showcase the power of the almighty during chapter 1 since chapter 1 is already predetermined and I couldn't change/alter anything if I'm trying to keep the original Yhwach instead of making it AU ) Again thank you for responding and for giving me a chance to explain and talk to such a considerate and wonderful person.

TheChaosdragon:I apologize It was a hastily done review I also dont like dialogue fanfics and its very slow as you said and I honestly just gave my opinion in the review Didn’t mean to offend you its not the worst I just gave my opinion as I should in a my personal review of the fic
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first time writing on webnovel so yes i'll give myself a 5 star review because yhwach said so and you know what happens to those that refuse his majesty

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I generally don't post reviews but as the author wanted me to give feedback so here we go:Grammer: Writing wise so far I have not noticed any grammatical errors and author does highlight which character is speaking which is good.Chapter: chapters are long and that is what I appreciate, yes some chapters feel like they are going for too long with just talking but I enjoy them as I do not enjoy having short chapters and being left in suspense for weeks to months.Characters: as noted above, though there is some reduction in points in both story and character as there are some moments that feel like there is a redundancy or repitition in dialogue.Update stability: keep it in your library for a week and you will see how many times you will be pinged daily.world background: For the author's first book he is very good at developing the world and giving visual to the scenery.overall: It is an enjoyable piece of story just that you might feel like you are reasing shakespeare sometimes due to the way the dialogues are going but when it is fun to see the little twists and turns that befall TWD cast when bleach is introduced into the world.

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this fanfic is so immersive I'm impressed with it this is worth you time I guarantee

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5 star for finally pointing out those cringe and repetitive multiversal harem with some sick and annoyingly forced relationship between many authors mc with some perfectly fine characters. like how they make their mc smile at a character's direction then they immediately thirst for him. like WUT?

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NotBobuchiha
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You have reflected the character very well in this fanfic of Yhwach which makes you feel the most real I have ever read, thank you for your effort. It's the best fanfic I've read at telling the story through the pov of two or more people. [img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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over all very good ff. kind of fell near the end just because of zeagar but very good over all and a absolute banger of a ff

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One of the very few fan fics here where effort can be felt when reading it. It starts out slow with the walking dead arc and but it is totally worth it once things start to scale up. The authors take on Yhwach and there own additions have been original and up to a quality that few other fan fics have been able to come close to. I have never been one to write a review as it was always a bit out of the way but this is the one which has broken that line of thought. I insist you at least try it.

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Been waiting ages for a tale like this, and let me tell you, it’s worth every second! The story is like a rollercoaster that never lets up, and the characters? They’re as real as they come. Each chapter leaves me yearning for more, A must read for anyone who craves a story that digs deep. Five stars, no doubt. -William Afton

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mega w author he makes sense and wrote all detalics, i love that fanfic, i love themes about bleach, im making a trash word for 140 words, cuz i cant post it while i have <140 words gl tho!

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