first time writing on webnovel so yes i'll give myself a 5 star review because yhwach said so and you know what happens to those that refuse his majesty

I generally don't post reviews but as the author wanted me to give feedback so here we go:Grammer: Writing wise so far I have not noticed any grammatical errors and author does highlight which character is speaking which is good.Chapter: chapters are long and that is what I appreciate, yes some chapters feel like they are going for too long with just talking but I enjoy them as I do not enjoy having short chapters and being left in suspense for weeks to months.Characters: as noted above, though there is some reduction in points in both story and character as there are some moments that feel like there is a redundancy or repitition in dialogue.Update stability: keep it in your library for a week and you will see how many times you will be pinged daily.world background: For the author's first book he is very good at developing the world and giving visual to the scenery.overall: It is an enjoyable piece of story just that you might feel like you are reasing shakespeare sometimes due to the way the dialogues are going but when it is fun to see the little twists and turns that befall TWD cast when bleach is introduced into the world.

this fanfic is so immersive I'm impressed with it this is worth you time I guarantee

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You have reflected the character very well in this fanfic of Yhwach which makes you feel the most real I have ever read, thank you for your effort. It's the best fanfic I've read at telling the story through the pov of two or more people. [img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend]

over all very good ff. kind of fell near the end just because of zeagar but very good over all and a absolute banger of a ff

One of the very few fan fics here where effort can be felt when reading it. It starts out slow with the walking dead arc and but it is totally worth it once things start to scale up. The authors take on Yhwach and there own additions have been original and up to a quality that few other fan fics have been able to come close to. I have never been one to write a review as it was always a bit out of the way but this is the one which has broken that line of thought. I insist you at least try it.

Been waiting ages for a tale like this, and let me tell you, it’s worth every second! The story is like a rollercoaster that never lets up, and the characters? They’re as real as they come. Each chapter leaves me yearning for more, A must read for anyone who craves a story that digs deep. Five stars, no doubt. -William Afton

mega w author he makes sense and wrote all detalics, i love that fanfic, i love themes about bleach, im making a trash word for 140 words, cuz i cant post it while i have <140 words gl tho!