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Alfiemooon
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2024-02-06 10:19

It reads like a summary rather than a story which makes it hard to read.

Harry Potter: Mind Control

Monk_of_Souls
4.1
36 Chs

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avrsc2_
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What an incredible way to throw your work in the trash. I don't know if you were thinking when you wrote the chapter but this is a new record of how to force the plot in the worst way imaginable

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Eduardo_Second
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drj5025
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It was going fine until you pulled an Avatar TLAB.

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J0s3_Angel
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It is a good story/work...well there was a time when it was, because the author decided to ruin a story with a lot of future and a lot to give, basically it has very good chapters but the last one and the ideas that the author leaves behind That chapter just leaves this story completely garbage.

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LaziestMan
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Hello author don't want to look rude but can you recommend my novel " I am a Waste who got system " at the end of one of your chapters

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Has great potential so please keep on updating the story

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