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Miki_Marlo75
Miki_Marlo75Lv41yr
2024-01-09 02:49

I honestly don't know what to say about the story. You could say that I was disappointed because of how the writing progressed, the writing is acceptable, the plot is empty, so to speak.I would like it to have a more serious approach and not so simple So far the story left a lot to be desired, it seems like a classic cliché story with the main character as a dreamer.

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Beamingkangaroo
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what an immature brat.... can't even take honest reviews and lashes out to readers....

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Beamingkangaroo:what an immature brat.... can't even take honest reviews and lashes out to readers....
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