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2024-01-13 17:14

The problem with a lot of these sports fanfics is that they are good at telling you about what happens in a game. Even keeping you rooting for the MC to win. But I know nothing about his life. I don't know what car he drives where he lives. What his house looks like what his apartment looks like what his parents house looks like. Nothing. I don't know how much he's getting paid for semi-pro. Don't know if you got a contract to be playing for the pro league. Don't know how much you got paid for that. Don't know how much you got paid to play in the national World Cup. I don't know if he bought anything with his money. I don't know anything. All I know is that he's good at soccer or football. I understand you have to get him out of the miners and the selectbro. You might call it the U10 group. You have to get him in the Simi pros or the pros. But once he was there, it should all be about fun, not just sports.

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