First of all, I'm not a soccer fan so I had to pause to look for references to players and movements they make in games. After that the pace of the novel is good but we know almost nothing about his world, practically non-existent childhood, only directly to match / training / match / training, for example now he is 15 years old but he still goes to school? It's just these last chapters where we see that he seems to have a life
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First of all. Thanks for the review and the critique you said. This will help my writing skills. I am very bad at writing childhood things as I myself am one of the youngest in the circle of my relatives. The youngest is only 1 year younger than me. Due to that, it is very hard to write things like childhood. I will try to better myself in that. As for school, he absolved it with around fifteen. Germany has a 12-year School duty. You need to be at least 12 years in school. You could make it in various ways, but most footballers go to the "Gymnasium" with 12 grades. Our MC skipped 3-4 grades, meaning he absolved it with around 14. As for the training part, I will try to make more slice-of-life into the novel. Sorry for the long comment.
