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jesus_5209Lv17mth
2024-06-21 01:31

La verdad cuando leí los primeros 2 capítulos me parecieron muy buenos e interesantes, pero después lo leí hasta el capítulo 6 porque la verdad me aburrí y no lo quise leer más es muy aburrido y estúpido porque carajos lavaría dinero y dejaría a una familia que lo ama tanto solo por querer rebelarse pero contra que es estúpido y lo haces parecer que beber alcohol,drogarse y tener sexo sea lo único divertido y lo peor es escribes que a los 11 años

Modern Family: I want Freedom

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70 Chs

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Worldofimagination
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Brother, I can't defend this fic. It's fine to make the MC a troublemaker and a rebel—it can even be fun—but 11 years old is too much. Not to mention that it's only the 5th episode and the MC is already literally a god, with all abilities maxed out. I prefer more serious fics, where the author makes an effort to create something fun and exciting for the audience. This is just senseless wish fulfillment. I wouldn't be surprised if the MC starts chasing women like Pokémon.

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JamesMVP23
JamesMVP23Lv5

Only reason this is popular is because the modern family genre. This essentially a teenager’s imagination going wild with AI

7mth
Diffuser
DiffuserLv4

The main character kind of just becomes and adult at 11 so there’s no real development so far

7mth
Lumos22
Lumos22Lv4

bit edgy for me, but could work for some people. Just ain't my cup of tea, but it's well written

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Kaizou_Koi
Kaizou_KoiLv11

The writing is quite good. But I don't like the story and mc at all. He became op so fast that makes it totally turn off for me and the story became irrelevant. There's no fun in reading it. Besides I can't stand mc's attitude and conduct at all

7mth
SinOfSloth17
SinOfSloth17Lv13

The story is more like a summary of what happens to the characters than a actual story. For example (Chap 39) We see Alex celebrate that she can do the speech. Mc lends one of his cars to Phil and Claire. Everybody gets to the school and then Alex's graduation ceremony and speech is summed up in a paragraph. Then it just says they go to dinner after and that's it and it moves on to Jay's birthday which isn't much better in terms of content. The actual chapter is basically the same as this summary with at max 3 conversations worth of dialog for the Alex part of the chapter, and I'd say about the same amount of dialog for the Jay part.

7mth
Piggy
PiggyLv15

just a wish fufillment fanfict nothing special. dude is a repressed middle aged man filled with regret acting out his fantasies as a kid; parting n driving at 11, getting templates from a system, rich parents. doesnt help that the grammar hurts

7mth
PinnacleExistence
PinnacleExistenceLv14

It's like reading a shopping list, and maybe that has more appeal than this..

7mth
DefinitelyNotACat
DefinitelyNotACatLv4

this is so stupid, its basically op guy does whatever he wants... whats eveen there to read, whats fun, whats gripping.

7mth
PokemonJoker
PokemonJokerLv3

It’s a gross story. Starts off with a 11 year old getting drunk and a 13 year old having intercourse. Just no common sense at all. Another poorly written fic

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