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DefinitelyNotACat
DefinitelyNotACatLv46mth
2024-05-30 18:17

this is so stupid, its basically op guy does whatever he wants... whats eveen there to read, whats fun, whats gripping.

Modern Family: I want Freedom

burakku
3.6
70 Chs

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burakku
burakkuAuthor

Thanks for the review. I don't really understand what is meant with the OP. If you talk about the money that could be called OP, but it also has a story. At least that is what I believe. Anyway I will try to analyze it and better it

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Worldofimagination
WorldofimaginationLv12

Brother, I can't defend this fic. It's fine to make the MC a troublemaker and a rebel—it can even be fun—but 11 years old is too much. Not to mention that it's only the 5th episode and the MC is already literally a god, with all abilities maxed out. I prefer more serious fics, where the author makes an effort to create something fun and exciting for the audience. This is just senseless wish fulfillment. I wouldn't be surprised if the MC starts chasing women like Pokémon.

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JamesMVP23
JamesMVP23Lv5

Only reason this is popular is because the modern family genre. This essentially a teenager’s imagination going wild with AI

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Diffuser
DiffuserLv4

The main character kind of just becomes and adult at 11 so there’s no real development so far

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Lumos22
Lumos22Lv4

bit edgy for me, but could work for some people. Just ain't my cup of tea, but it's well written

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Kaizou_Koi
Kaizou_KoiLv4

The writing is quite good. But I don't like the story and mc at all. He became op so fast that makes it totally turn off for me and the story became irrelevant. There's no fun in reading it. Besides I can't stand mc's attitude and conduct at all

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SinOfSloth17
SinOfSloth17Lv13

The story is more like a summary of what happens to the characters than a actual story. For example (Chap 39) We see Alex celebrate that she can do the speech. Mc lends one of his cars to Phil and Claire. Everybody gets to the school and then Alex's graduation ceremony and speech is summed up in a paragraph. Then it just says they go to dinner after and that's it and it moves on to Jay's birthday which isn't much better in terms of content. The actual chapter is basically the same as this summary with at max 3 conversations worth of dialog for the Alex part of the chapter, and I'd say about the same amount of dialog for the Jay part.

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Piggy
PiggyLv15

just a wish fufillment fanfict nothing special. dude is a repressed middle aged man filled with regret acting out his fantasies as a kid; parting n driving at 11, getting templates from a system, rich parents. doesnt help that the grammar hurts

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PinnacleExistence
PinnacleExistenceLv14

It's like reading a shopping list, and maybe that has more appeal than this..

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PokemonJoker
PokemonJokerLv3

It’s a gross story. Starts off with a 11 year old getting drunk and a 13 year old having intercourse. Just no common sense at all. Another poorly written fic

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