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Humbuub
HumbuubLv49mth
2024-05-30 14:35

I have no trust on any MF FF anymore. They all end up the same.

Modern Family: I want Freedom

burakku
3.6
70 Chs

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burakku
burakkuAuthor

Thanks for the review, but I would like to ask. What do you mean end up the same? If you don't talk about what is wrong nobody will change it

9mth
Humbuub
HumbuubLv4

it's just bad. you went way over the top when it comes to wish fulfillment. Can't really enjoy anything, since everything felt unearned.

burakku:Thanks for the review, but I would like to ask. What do you mean end up the same? If you don't talk about what is wrong nobody will change it
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Brother, I can't defend this fic. It's fine to make the MC a troublemaker and a rebel—it can even be fun—but 11 years old is too much. Not to mention that it's only the 5th episode and the MC is already literally a god, with all abilities maxed out. I prefer more serious fics, where the author makes an effort to create something fun and exciting for the audience. This is just senseless wish fulfillment. I wouldn't be surprised if the MC starts chasing women like Pokémon.

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