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FinallyCaredNotLv49mth
2024-05-27 22:16

Good start, rocky... really rocky early life... getting better since coinciding with modern family. .my brain just automatically defended the mc in his childhood but it really could use a bit of polishing... Like more stories than the draws for the years if mc is still gonna include his family in his life. college stint back in his 11th birthday ? Could use more context. Like did the mc do his tests in advance so he was in collwge or did he just crash into a college party? Then the thing about "freedom" bit superficial if it is just about doing illegal stuff, right? Thought it was gonna be more on the inhibitions from his past life or something. Or at least against toxic cultural and social norms . But yea.... Up to you. Not really hating or anything , just my personal opinion/suggestions right after binging till chap 21. If there's no hae between mc and his family.... I don't get not updating or at least letting them know he's okay. With how rich they are, you could even just point out that they kept distance but still had people watching out for him... And if mc actually has Spanish descent ... Really unlikely mc could just disappear from them. Especially in the us since it is not a supernatural novel and there's no mention of mc sweeping up his tracks. .... Suits for a lawfirm, BBT for friends in pasedena are my suggestion for shows to include later in the story ... Thanks for the binge and looking forward to the next

Modern Family: I want Freedom

burakku
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70 Chs

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burakku
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Thanks for the honest review and the recommendations

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Brother, I can't defend this fic. It's fine to make the MC a troublemaker and a rebel—it can even be fun—but 11 years old is too much. Not to mention that it's only the 5th episode and the MC is already literally a god, with all abilities maxed out. I prefer more serious fics, where the author makes an effort to create something fun and exciting for the audience. This is just senseless wish fulfillment. I wouldn't be surprised if the MC starts chasing women like Pokémon.

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JamesMVP23
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