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Ellipse_ark
Ellipse_arkLv131yr
2024-04-05 01:23

This novel story is the biggest strength but writing is really poor there are inconsistencies in some part like example when if you are a great detective then you should also have some connection but as much i have read he have only one ally which is police officer which have no power and clueless just like us readers and mc become detective before 10 are you kidding me are are you Sherlock Holmes

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Duke_Cordellia
Duke_CordelliaLv3

Hey therez can you give some critique to my novel? Not the fanfiction one. I rather want it harshly if you have some time becaus eit is difficult to gave objective flow myself.

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