Review Detail of FinnsRevenge in Infinite Evolution: The Multiverse Odyssey

2/3/3/3/3. Bro you don't need to separate every fking sentence with quotation marks if they're being said by the same person. It leads to bloat and confusion when you have 9 different quoted sentences. Also ffs, pick a name and stick with it already! Is his name Alex, Axel or Leo?? And another thing, the scene in the woods where he fought and killed a few guys with fire magic channeled through his sword and kissed the girl after? Having Lily immediately smell a woman on him is so fking cringe and ludicrous considering she should smell blood, metal and barbecue. Overall I cannot recommend this fic to anyone till author goes back through and edits the previous chapters