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I am....very conflicted. Let's start it up with a positive, it's a good story, but for the negative...it's not a naruto fanfic, not really, will elaborate later. The gimick of Sakura is also...not real/kinda pointless? And worst of all, the real mc is....a bit of a Merry Sue, he does a lot of impossible stuff with a lot of hard effort yes...but he doesn't really fail?This entire story feels like a disconnect with what lured me into it. Without spoiling I'd advice to stop reading here. The reincarnation with a war veteran sakura because he saved a goddess without knowing and then punished for it, and then another goddess said she will fix it, but doesn't. So the story just takes care of it a different way which basically just results in them being....weird siblings/strangers?Then the author pulls some big questions for the entire world building of naruto, that sure are interesting but....resolves them in such a way that it doesn't feel the same anymore. One could argue that it's expanding the source material into their own thing. But....it also doesn't feel like that to me. It's...to thoughtful and planned out without substance? Not in action but....a dream, things happen but it doesn't feel right. None of it feels like it's possible for a down to earth person, only by a being that is attempting to act like one.Maybe it's bias, because I don't like the way many things are done while still liking the storyBut I advice for fans of Naruto to avoid this as it's more for people that want a more elaborate story. Oh yeah, and genderbender fans are wrong here as well.

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