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2023-12-09 21:59

This is fun. I'm loving the personality of the characters. I can feel the distinctness of each. The writing formatting isn't my favorite and could potentially be improved upon more but, I like it. This story has a lot of potential and I hope you continue and improve.

In TVD/TO as Kol Mikaelson

ItachiWeasel
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ItachiWeasel
ItachiWeaselAuthor

thanks bro what do u feel is not good enough as u can see I am trying to improve my style is it not flowing properly or is there some other issue

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ItachiWeasel
ItachiWeaselAuthor

this is purely tradition and self motivation kindly give reviews and tell me where to improve I will probably release more chapters today

1yr

ArtoriaPendragon_
ArtoriaPendragon_Lv14

Besides the rather Eh grammar. The actual plot is pretty freaking good. The author got Kol rather spot on, and some of the explanations for stuff like magic, is pretty interesting and plausible. The only hope I have is that the author gives him a halfway decent love interest (or love interests) like Bonnie, Davina, or even Caroline. (Or two of them if they want)

1yr
prince7777
prince7777Lv5

pls 🙏 don't leave it have wayit's a good novel

1yr
night_king01010
night_king01010Lv4

its amazing! looking forward to it don't end it in the middle

1yr
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Legion_Lv1

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Cody_Mohr
Cody_MohrLv4

I like the smoothness of the rewrite I look forward to the continuation and hope to see mc go to another world of magic like charmed to see how it would go or another magical world like teen Wolf to see what happened with The originals in those worlds

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Flint679
Flint679Lv4

This story is amazing. I look forward to reading more.

1yr
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