Review Detail of TrueVoid45 in Is there an end in heaven?

ok so the story is great to read and I recommend it, but there are a few problems for me. I don't know if the author noticed or just overlooked it but the pronouns are sometimes correct and other times wrong, so far that's my main problem. I would like to stress once again idk if the author main language is English or not, I'm just pointing out an mistake.