An additional person inside the MC's head... I doubt System is the word you are looking for here. Try DID instead. Dissociative Identity Disorder with a personality that wants the MC to avoid learning anything due to the plot. -It's not criticism, just observations after reading 30 or so chapters without finding any improvement except grammar.
kamidemond:well merlin is his system I just try to made him organic
QuiteSarcastic:An additional person inside the MC's head... I doubt System is the word you are looking for here. Try DID instead. Dissociative Identity Disorder with a personality that wants the MC to avoid learning anything due to the plot. -It's not criticism, just observations after reading 30 or so chapters without finding any improvement except grammar.