The tag states system does that come later on?

For the system can you use brackets or some kind of space, because at this point I get confused because I am reading the system instead of action.

The tag states there is a system but there has been no evidence of this yet.

Thanks for the chapter just. I just wish it was longer

Why are people in DXD fanfics always joining Rias at this point it’s overused and stale.

I like the story but I feel as it is going to slow. I don’t mind a build up but I would like for at least some speed ups or a small timeskip.

Re write you rushed the power level. Should have given him a martial artist template first then another template when Frieza arrives corresponding to the power level.

I am confused the tag stated a system but there is no introduction of it?

Nope sorry this makes no more sense. Dropping it.

I don’t mind Luna but the fanfics I have rad where she seems to know of other world powers is a bit insane he is given a power that influences everything yet gets caught by a student.

Isn’t Homelander a budget superman?

Saw this on ff.net years ago was never finished. Let’s hope there are more than 45 chapters. Also can you put the skills or the gamer parts in brackets or in Bold please. Makes it easier to read.

Keep it up👍👍

Orochimaru got beat and killed so much times and still turned up like he just got out the shower.

Is Yuno still part elf like the anime or just a normal human with good power?

You need to fix the writing. The speech marks disappear from time or they are not there at all. Certain phrases or words are re-repeated in the same paragraphs.

Will this ever be updated started off with a good premise.

DR. Linda Martin= Lucifer

What is the point of Rowan at this point might as well just watch the anime?

Why did you change the style of writing now it looks tacky.