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Fatty_Adigun
Fatty_AdigunLv410mth
2024-03-19 01:57

Sooo I love the storyline of all the characters especially about the male lead and female lead... but i think the Ml is not powerful enough to protect his mate and omega from the clutches of his father.. he is not like any Alpha I know and read about... iIknow he is strong and powerful but he doesn't have what it takes to take down his father from what I have read and also ever since the Fl got associated with him, she hasn't been safely and even more importantly her life long dream got shattered just because she loved him which isn't fair to her.. I hope 🙏 in the latter part of the story the Ml can be a worthy, strong and powerful Alpha that can protect his mate from any danger..no matter if the danger his is father or not. He needs to be ready to take the risk and protect our innocent little lamb Fl from harm... I love 💕 this story now .. but I will love ❣️ it more if the Author can make our Ml more dependable and strong . More love 💕💕😘😘.. Keep up the good 👍😊 work.

How I Became The Alpha Mafia Boss' Target

QueenFrieza
4.9
329 Chs

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QueenFrieza
QueenFriezaAuthor

I appreciate this review so much! thank you for taking the time to give me genuine feedback 💗🥰 I agree wholeheartedly though! He is not strong enough to take on his father as he is in the current story, but things are on the horizon! I hope he can prove himself to you soon 🤞

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Fatty_Adigun
Fatty_AdigunLv4

[img=recommend][img=recommend] i will surely follow him in his journey throughout the story to see how far he can really go.. And I will always support my Ml 😻😻....

QueenFrieza:I appreciate this review so much! thank you for taking the time to give me genuine feedback 💗🥰 I agree wholeheartedly though! He is not strong enough to take on his father as he is in the current story, but things are on the horizon! I hope he can prove himself to you soon 🤞
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QueenFrieza
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Shameless self review from the author here!! The original purpose I had for writing an omegaverse book was to break down the typical stereotypes where consent is nonexistent and omegas are mistreated in such a calculating way that they still fall in love with someone awful because of instincts or a bond that they had no say in. Whenever I write books its in response to something else I've read. I really just want a world where women don't feel they have to accept being treated less than human just so they can keep someone at their side. Love can be a beautiful thing and a world where people know their worth is a world I want to be a part of! So join me on this journey of trying to craft an alpha ml who isn't toxic as he navigates a world where other alphas still believe that the women set in front of them are theirs for the taking. He has a hard battle ahead of him!

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AuthorEriElegbede
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Not just fall in love with the books but also the Characters.

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AuthorEriElegbede
AuthorEriElegbedeLv11

This story is bang, it deserves more credit than it is shown. Gonna recommend it on my reading list as the little I can do!!!

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LotusLin
LotusLinLv15

The author writes beautifully and the words practically roll off the pages. The beginning of the story so far does a wonderful job of giving the female lead a relatable background. And the male lead, beautiful specimen that he is, definitely is living up to his alpha reputation. They meet in a unique way, filled with intrigue and mystery. Although the chemistry is there from the start. I can't wait to read more!

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Jeri_
Jeri_Lv15

Loving the beginning and the female lead! The story is intriguing and exciting, just as I would have expected from the author. ✨ The dialogue seems so natural and realistic, with no forced and unreasonable events. 🫧 The descriptions were well written, just like the author’s every other book. I suggest you read it if you love thrilling novels. 🗿

1yr
NispedanaSan
NispedanaSanLv13

This is great! Definitely one of the better written contemporary stories out there. It is not only well written, the characters' emotions and situations were also presented wonderfully. Add this to the interesting concepts of mafia and alpha and you have a potential best seller! Awesome job so far! I believe this would blow up soon!

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Zephyrous
ZephyrousLv3

I have read all the previous works of the author. She has a knack for weaving these beautiful characters in a web of twisting plots. This book is no different. Imbued in mystery from the very beginning I am loving every second of it.Our FL is just the sweetest and ML is right amount of strong yet soft in the heart. Can't wait to see where the story takes them. Wishing the author the best of luck for the contest. I am rooting for you. 😘😘😘

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Grumpy_me
Grumpy_meLv12

what a journey .what a book ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ I am completely in love with this story ❣️❣️ author really did amazing job. 👏 👏 it is kind of slow burning but in reality it isn't. The storyline is really well written, characters are interesting and funny and you can actually feel all kinds of emotions through the book. gem worth reading! 🥰

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Philister_Kazira
Philister_KaziraLv14

I loved it . it kept me engaged all through. Full of steamy romance and suspense.

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