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Max_I_4248Lv17mth
2024-08-05 19:17

The work may be good. The hero woke up in the world of history known to him. (Which spoils the description a little, the gradual description of the world, periodically just dumping information) In the role of a character known to him. Possessing some wonderful "reward system". Many people in the world also have a relatively good talent. (Which is good because it relatively levels out the characters) But: -The system literally controls and directs the hero's story. -The hero himself is happy to be prodded, he literally sucked on this incomprehensible golden finger. -Because the hero himself is self-confident, stupid, usually sees the worst in others, thinks even worse of them. If it weren't for the "-", or you like them, then the story is good.

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Captain_Spoiler
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Honest reviews are here.. [Extreme Spoiler Alert] This is a novel where MC is transmigrated into a novel World (The Great Conqueror) where he is a side character who died early in the novel and treated as a trash young master.. NOBODY on his side.. Both of his parents are dead, and he is being raised by his uncle, his father's brother, who is also the Head of the Khaleji family.. MC uncle and MC father has a special eye that could see through the soul of someone, and that is why they know that the MC soul are not belong to their nephew/son anymore.. His uncle told his wife that there are foreign soul possessing their nephew body thus, the Head of Khaleji wife has been plotting and scheming many thing to ruin MC life and make a bad rumours to ruin his reputation.. Their bodyguard also know about the secret.. Moreover, his uncle knows about these plot but only gives advice for his wife to stop.. Unfortunately, she didn't listen, and his uncle just ignored it, which caused MC to continue feeling down.. UNTIL MC shows a promising talent that his uncle makes a move to stop these shenanigans once and for all.. It kinda dissapointed that MC secret is revealed.. His uncle is not calling him reincarnator or transmigrator.. He is also not calling MC a time traveller but he thinks MC is a Returnee.. In this novel, there is Regressor, there is also a Reincarnator (strongest man in the novel world), and don't forget Transmigrator (MC).. There are also people with the ability to see the future or read the fate or pathfinder of "Dark One/Chosen One" or see a glimpse of Destiny.. Because of this, there are too many people who know about MC secret.. That is not all.. All characters, Yes, ALL CHARACTER has a unique ability that is quite strong and hard to deal with.. And the story becomes more and more complicated with all of those.. To be honest, even after reading the whole story, I only understood slightly.. The history of the Dark One, the mystery of Dark One, and so on, it really that complicated and hard to understand.. At first MC is transmigrator but after the mystery of the "Dark One" being reveal, MC actually is a Reincarnator? He originally from novel world and not earth? What?? Very confusing.. I guess the author got short fuse with all complicated things he wrote.. The title of the novel, "I Become a Wizard with a Quest Book" kinda simplifies the exact description of this novel.. MC got his golden finger, the Quest Book, and his knowledge of this novel world.. He gains something like mind space, where he consciousness and his soul are going into a white space with a floating Quest book.. He can gain the Quest from the book, and he also can use his mind space as a space ring.. The story has good and flaws at the same time.. The author will introduce something new and booomm, he explain right away from A to Z about that thing, causing the novel to become too long and has to going through boring explanations.. But if you think positively, It is good as the author doesn't leave the reader pondering in a wild and explain the history, new character or new thing right away.. As a result, the growth of MC strength has become quite slow.. Well, based on the duration of MC growth, it is quite fast because MC only takes one day to grow from rank 0 into rank 1.. But the problem was, the author takes 50 chapters, but only two days are passed in the novel.. No matter how good MC achievements, he never gets a high reward.. The best thing he gets is artifact and EXP.. and the EXP is not high.. The system said MC completed a high-grade achievement but only gave 75 EXP.. Even the beast he killed made him receive 3,500 EXP.. High-grade achievement only given 2% of the reward value?? There is once MC got good reward for complete 1st floor pagoda but if you think carefully, the reward is lackluster compare to the effort that MC show during that Arc.. Sometimes, the story makes us think of a nonsense situation.. For example, the author makes MC be able to remember a recipe and each step of the potion/pill in alchemist that he read in the novel, BUT MC doesn't even know how to absorb the crystal?? It is like the original author of the novel world wrote about the recipe of potion in great detail to the point that their reader (MC) can also make them BUT you don't wrote any technique to absorb crystal?? MC has to learn Energy Absorption Technique from his maid.. If you hope for OP MC, this is not for you.. MC is strong but cannot be considered as OP.. He needs many items or talismans to conquer the E-rank dungeon, and he is also not soloing it.. His stat is quite low.. All his stat started lower than average people.. He is always in short of mana or energy or stamina.. His HP starts at 2/2.. The lowest HP that I ever see either in novel and game.. Even lv1 pokemon have higher HP than him.. At Ch80, his HP is growing to 15/15.. Plus, after he entered 1st floor pagoda (Ch90+), the author never showed MC status window ever again.. Wizard ranks are spirit-rank, low-rank, mid-rank, high-rank, master-rank, grandmaster-rank, lord-rank.. And each realm has 10 minor realms, such as 1st sky low-rank wizard, 2nd sky low-rank wizard, and so on.. At Ch170, MC is still at low-rank wizard.. Yes, the story ends at Ch192.. It shows a complete tag, but actually, it is a cliffhanger novel.. The author has abandoned the novel.. At least the author is being honest.. It is more annoying than other authors who clearly abandoned the novel by not updating for more than two years but still has nerves to put "hiatus" tag.. That type of author is giving false hope to their own fan.. At very least, this author told his fans that he not going to continue the novel like a real man, a straight forward..

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