Toji the king of monkeys will always be the best

I see Toji, I click.

Author here, disclaimers before going in to the story. The main character is not Toji; he looks like him, so he won't be imitating the way he acts. I still have not decided on a romance or if this will be a harem. Likely not. The story will involve the DC Multiverse starting on Earth 16, the Young Justice TV show. Next Earth will either be Earth 3(Crime Syndicate) or Earth 49(Injustice Universe)

I don't really like DC/MARVEL, but it's Toji so it's okay x x x x xx x x x xx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

i like this i really do and i know there only 10 chapter right now but it kinda annoying that legit 90% of this fic so far is just training, training test abilitys and more training please for the love of god make the next few chapters ANYTHING but god dam training please

It's seriously good. He is OP, atleast in the YJ universe he is, a bit reckless but he knows that too, let's see what happens in the future..

The story is just bad, there is literally zero character interaction after the first 2 or 3 chapters (the shikigami and his pets don't count), each chapter is just a boring summary of his off screen grinding, interspersed with MC slaughtering nameless redshirts, nothing has any impact or emotional weight. It's not worth reading.

Here's my summary of the book: Great grammar, fluid and well-written combats, and a huge and rich cohesion of words. The story so far is very good, I hope he remains an anti-hero and that this novel isn't a harem. Congratulations on a great book, my only criticism is that it has too few chapters hahaha, I'm looking forward to it.

Are you going to write a different story?

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