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2024-05-23 02:56

i want to read all available chapters (not counting vip), before writting anything. The overhall translation is between 6.5 and 7.5, and most of the problems i have are tied to the translation. Cons: like most stories here, names will get messed up, sometimes to world gets a bit confusing ( but it feels like the problem comes from the translation, not bad writting) and had to hit google for some expressions used ( for example 007, the first thought that came to mind was James Bond, but, it seems, it's an expression that meens 24/7). Pros: Great characters ( really like the MC and his first General) the world is good ( just don't say great because it, sometimes gets confusing, as said in the cons), the world building and character progression is very fluid ( it never seems to force anything in, everything seems to come at a proper time) and no romance or harem (because alot people like to see that), so far, but it isn't missed and it can be added without seeming force. Yeah, recomend this book alot, it's a very enjoyble reed overhall

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