Author here, just thanking all those who read and support my novel. Its a revised version of one of my earlier novels that I deleted due to numerous errors and blah blah blah. Well, detailed stuff aside just read and enjoy and leave a review if you have the time.

Hello. this francis xavier. above everything else the world background and writing quality for me is superb in all respect. setting of the world background helped deepen much of the author's insights of the story and I am thrilled with how creative the story setting binds on every characters making them behave in the exact way the author really wanted them to behave. I for one really like this story and hopes to learn more from the writer of this story

it was such a good read, man I didn't even see the time pass, its got potential to improve and has a solid story line. waiting for the next update :)

Honestly the story is quite good in it's own way, but I do recommend that the way you structure dialogue should be consistent cause you kept switching from [ ] to ' ' which was... questionable. But overall it's a good read. I just hope that it doesn't take the generic isekai route.

honestly, wow! I expected myself to read about 2 or 3 chapters but ended up reading almost the whole thing. I've already added the book to my library and in the meanwhile will read it as much as I can until you ùpdate your stories. I can not express how interesting this book is. looking forward to your next update and great job!

The grammar is satisfactory. The updates are steady. The story itself is uniquely made. I would like to see more visual description regarding the appearance of the characters and what the setting looks like. Best wishes to the author. Keep working and sharpening your craft.

From the few first chapters that I read, it's an excellent book with a compelling plot, captivating characters, and a fantastic world background. I can't wait to delve into the rest. highly recommended!

I really like the writing style of this novel. I have been an isekai fan for a long time, and reading this book made me feel nostalgic for the first isekai series that I've experienced. I like the MC so far, and I have no doubt that the world would be expanded more and characters would be developed. So far, it's been a good read[img=recommend]

10/10 and for sure a good read. The plot is good, and so are the characters. I began reading this expecting a good book, and it has made me very interested

Editing is remarkable in this book. Like, surprising. I'm not sure if I can remember a single grammar mistake. If you want some good writing quality, this is the place.