Hello! The writing for this story is good. The way Batman is portrayed is exceptional and the attention to detail is quite good. Despite all that though I will probably not continue with this novel and that is because of the MC. The MC design is pretty poor and he is extremely irrational despite being basically a machine. He is shaping up to be random DC villain ”C”. Meaning that despite his much vaunted higher level intelligence, he acts like any random villain you pull off the streets of Gotham. He doesn’t stand out from the likes of penguin or mr freeze. Just another stepping stone on the justice leagues path. If that was the authors goal then so be it, but the cringe got really bad with the way the MC thinks and acts. It starts getting cringey around halfway through what is written so far and only gets edgier as the story progresses. Nevertheless, the writing quality is high so I can’t say this novel is bad just not my taste.
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don't listen to this person author there has literally only been one interaction between the MC and the justice league and it is too soon to tell what the dynamic between the MC and the justice league is going to be
Idk I mean his first interaction was very telling about the future of the character imo but I could definitely be wrong.
Goat1king:don't listen to this person author there has literally only been one interaction between the MC and the justice league and it is too soon to tell what the dynamic between the MC and the justice league is going to be
