Your creativity shines through, loving loving it so far please 🥺 don't drop it on a cliffhanger

This scoop is one of the most original I have seen, in all the time I have been reading these stories by fans for fans, the story itself of failsafe, is incredible in many factors from the originality of the character to take a batman villain which people not familiar with the comic book world would not know him, from psychological basis forms in a machine which should not have such ideas and feelings and place the desire or goal of killing his own creator which creates his reason for existence and that creates disappointment when it comes to do it for me is really great.

This is awesome. I love how you are building the story keep up the good work.

There are a few changes to the story that could enhance it even more, but overall 5/5 stars. The only real gripe I have with it is not having enough chapters to read lol.

Hello! The writing for this story is good. The way Batman is portrayed is exceptional and the attention to detail is quite good. Despite all that though I will probably not continue with this novel and that is because of the MC. The MC design is pretty poor and he is extremely irrational despite being basically a machine. He is shaping up to be random DC villain ”C”. Meaning that despite his much vaunted higher level intelligence, he acts like any random villain you pull off the streets of Gotham. He doesn’t stand out from the likes of penguin or mr freeze. Just another stepping stone on the justice leagues path. If that was the authors goal then so be it, but the cringe got really bad with the way the MC thinks and acts. It starts getting cringey around halfway through what is written so far and only gets edgier as the story progresses. Nevertheless, the writing quality is high so I can’t say this novel is bad just not my taste.

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This LN is more than fanfic. Despite the update taking too long and slow, the story is worth it. Like I said before, this LN is more than fanfic. It was like the new alternative story. Combining the different events into one makes the alternative event of both events is unexpected. Good job and keep it up.

at chapter 15 i am really interested in this book ==============================================================================================================