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Jackleell
JackleellLv11yr
2024-04-02 12:26

No one wants to read this garbage. If the protagonist wasn't a girl, that would be fine. You know, it feels like the story is only about the system and not the main character. This story is stupid and trash. Why did you have to stop writing your other book just to give us this trashy book? I don't understand how your brain works, author.

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HellDeimoS
HellDeimoSLv2

If the author is writing this, then it is obvious that he likes such things. And there are readers, but they are few, since it is obvious that not everyone will like this. But why an author should write something that you like, I don't understand. The author primarily writes what he likes. And he also writes it for free. You don't pay money and write such funny complaints. The only complaint may be that the author did not write warnings about such things...

James_Carlson_5574
James_Carlson_5574Lv1

Yo si lo quiero leer, me encanta.👌

elpepe
elpepeLv2

Exacto, hay como 5 o más fanfics de este autor donde el prota es mujer, así que no se que se esperaba

HellDeimoS:If the author is writing this, then it is obvious that he likes such things. And there are readers, but they are few, since it is obvious that not everyone will like this. But why an author should write something that you like, I don't understand. The author primarily writes what he likes. And he also writes it for free. You don't pay money and write such funny complaints. The only complaint may be that the author did not write warnings about such things...
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