Item: Feel The Rhythm Of Love.
Rating: 4.4
Author: daylightmoon123445

daylightmoon123445Lv19mth

2024-03-24 19:28

Starting strong, I see. I am pleasantly surprised by...everything in this novel! 1. The writing quality, I see an excellent use of grammatical structures and punctuation, there would be no problem for the reader to stop and re-read because they couldn't understand what you say(great job there :) ) 2. The plot: Cruel, sad and romantic, everything checks, so I think the only thing left to do is...keep writing this nice story. 3. The stability of updates: I see the chapters locked at 16, unless you plan to finish this story between 50-70 chapters this might not be a great idea :( Overall, this is a great story and I love how you bring your story to life with your words and works, and I hope to see more!

Feel The Rhythm Of Love.

Winter

4.7

21 Chs

Liked by 1 people

Replies2

Winterful_dayLv1

I'm planning on 70 chapters tho. How did you guess? It might be more but the minimum is 70. chapters.

9mth

daylightmoon123445Lv1

I'm so glad you have decided to give your story a start and end, unlike many authors who stretch it out till it loses its essence. Then you're right to lock it early! Loving it so far <3

Winterful_day:I'm planning on 70 chapters tho. How did you guess? It might be more but the minimum is 70. chapters.

9mth

Other Reviews

TeLLer_taLesLv4

it's a good book, a good recommendation. It just needs a little bit improvement, I won't call out the author's mistakes as a fellow author myself, anyways keep it up author. It's a good book really, author please don't drop it.

1yr

Ms_SmilingLv4

It's such a lovely novel... I just love it. The author is so much thoughtful I accidentally stopped by this novel and it was worth it totally worth of my time.

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DylanHusandLv12

good story, good writing, enjoy to reading. so i will give a 5 stars!

10mth

Winterful_dayLv1

Hi everyone I'm the author of "Feel The Rhythm Of Love". I can assure you all it's worth reading. The story might start off boring but with every chapter it gets interesting. Thanks for reading.

11mth

DaoistrMoIjELv1

The story is quite amusing and interesting if u read further . The plot is cool and I definitely recommend this to everyone . I loved it✨✨also the character design is cool and the characters too. I love how the conversations are writen

11mth

ken_marvellousLv11

good piece ,worth totally your time . I would say the author did a great job here . I'm also feeling the rhythm of love from my own side . ☺️💖

7mth

Twinkle_124Lv3

I love the way how author portrait the story in practical way. I really recommend this book to everyone. Somehow, I feel like this story is going to be dear to my heart.

7mth

KayMayLaneLv2

This book is amazing, I will recommend this alongside my own book! The places and characters are so immersive in personality, I will follow and like this story. I love this book, I hope this book gets turned into a movie!

8mth

Dammy_DimplesLv2

Love this piece, this is such a good book with good spacing and a nice plot, it's one of the great stories I've read so far and it's a good recommendation 🤭 keep the pen dancing, I'm following up😁

8mth

SunnyBae13Lv2

Totally hooked on 'Feel The Rhythm Of Love'! The characters feel real, and the storyline keeps me coming back for more. Definitely recommend giving this one a read!

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