Review Detail of Samuel_Favour_Anya in GOA

thanks I hope you appreciate this island and the events about this island the novel will be rolling out in chapters and volumes.[img=recommend]

Um I'm just going to say, you might want to fix your synopsis. It's just one massive solid block of text that your eyes want to glaze over. Not to mention avoiding using repetitive words and just shortening it in general. Its meant to be a short little teaser to help the reader understand what they are getting into before they read, not a whole prologue.

thanks a lot I will get on it can you post me a sample of your own suggestion so i can review it while making the needed changes to the synopsis.