Item: Paving My Way With Science In This Magical Universe
Rating: 4
Author: Epic_Buddie123

Epic_Buddie123Lv151yr

2023-11-19 04:43

I really like the background story of the MC but I would love to if you could reveal abit more about him. Maybe when he his getting reborn and developing the technology - That he is getting flashbacks.[img=recommend]

Paving My Way With Science In This Magical Universe

Weary_Engineer

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Weary_EngineerAuthor

Thank you for you review. As you can see in first three chapters, we see the background of modern world and consequently our MC. These three chapter will draw the boundries of the power of our MC. I will mostly stick to these boundries.For example, our MC is a scientist specilizes on ai and implant chips. On other areas he will at most be above average. I will not make him beat a martial Master just because he happened to master modern boxing at some time in his original world. Actually this is one of the things I don't like the most. An author should not add random capabilities to the MC just for the story's sake. However, your suggestion does not require me to break the background of the MC. I can add flashbacks so that we can learn about him in a more subtle way. I will try.

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Epic_Buddie123Lv15

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Weary_Engineer:Thank you for you review. As you can see in first three chapters, we see the background of modern world and consequently our MC. These three chapter will draw the boundries of the power of our MC. I will mostly stick to these boundries.For example, our MC is a scientist specilizes on ai and implant chips. On other areas he will at most be above average. I will not make him beat a martial Master just because he happened to master modern boxing at some time in his original world. Actually this is one of the things I don't like the most. An author should not add random capabilities to the MC just for the story's sake. However, your suggestion does not require me to break the background of the MC. I can add flashbacks so that we can learn about him in a more subtle way. I will try.

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