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Review Detail of Alanray64 in Taking advantage of the beauty being poor, fooling her into being my girlfriend

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Standard reincarnated MC who had died after being cucked by his female LI. Reborn into his 18yr old self he immediately cuts off his original LI and chooses the future Miss rich billionaire from his class so she can provide for him. Standard development since he knows the future, he takes the opportunity to invest and grow to earn money fast and furious. Becomes a novelist by plagarising future novels and releases those stories on the web as his own to make money as well. It is an interesting read, tho the MC is rather abusive to his original LI which I do find abhorrent as technically she has done no wrong at that point in time and he was a pathetic little simp to her originally. I just feel he could have handled the breakup with this girl in a better manner, but no he straight up abuses and demeans her at every opportunity he gets when he comes across her. I understand he has a lot of negativity from his future self, yet he has not the emotional maturity to consider his actions. Future LI became a rich CEO lady and now current time future LI becomes an actress to try and get his attention again. Yet somehow the MC doesn’t realise he has changed the timeline and everything that had happened to him, now never did eventuate. Yeh, he is now just a manipulative guy turning everything to his betterment. (Which I imagine anyone would do if they were in his shoes, though I’d hope they be more in control of themselves) Now my main gripe with this novel is that many chapters are shortened. You get half a chapter and the rest are lost so you lose the flow when you go to the next chapter. It being a free read you could overlook it “maybe” but it is particularly nasty/interesting when something happens and then go to the new chapter and you have no idea what just happened? So this is probably a major issue that needs fixing. But anyways, it is a good read for the most part if you can ignore the issues mentioned. Is still scored it high as it does tick all the boxes for the review.

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Taking advantage of the beauty being poor, fooling her into being my girlfriend

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Mandiiyy
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What is the name of the original novel ?

Alanray64:Edit note ** as a matter of interest I googled this story and found the novel out there with the complete chapters, a few chapters behind complete.
Alanray64
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Edit note ** as a matter of interest I googled this story and found the novel out there with the complete chapters, a few chapters behind complete.