Alanray64
Avid reader, particular interests in Urban, rebirth/cultivation, critical returns and such novels along the theme of “am I a cultivation big shot”
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Alanray6412hCommentedParagraph repeat 🤦🏻♂️
"I never thought you could come back, but, I would have preferred you not to." Michael chuckled, his expression changing dramatically from before.- Alanray6413hCommented
Isn’nt the saying supposed to be 3 feet, not metres.. awfully long grass that would be.
Those who dared to provoke Blackwind Stockade now had grass over three meters tall on their graves.detailImmortality Cultivation: I Can increase My Stats Using Clansmen's Qi-BloodEastern · Centenary Cattle - Alanray6413hCommented
Going to say it’s a little far fetched to be speaking, let alone discussing these things at a year old. Sure the MC has adult memories but im surprised the parents aren’t thinking what type of monster they created.
Kai asked his mother about cultivation and other aspects of the world, but she did not provide him with the information since he was only a child. - Alanray6413hCommented
“..who got reincarnated “, it sounds very dull or stiff. Maybe as “…who had now reincarnated”
A man was holding a child in his arms with a smile on his face, he was the father of that child and his name was Alex. The child was Kai who got reincarnated. - Alanray641dReplied to lazygirl9detailRecently Dumped by Gold-Digger, Goddess Asked Me to Sign a Birth Consent FormUrban · Silly Little Bok Choy
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Not carving, try craving.
' How long has it been! 8 years? 9 years? 10 years? Aaanghhh! I finally received the carving I was waiting for, my empty womanhood is finally getting filled by someone other than my husband. Sob* you bastard! You better regret what you have missed ' - Alanray643dCommented
Gas? Maybe fast ?
Without any further resort, she began to take my length as gas as she could, from time to time, I could feel she wanted to throw up - Alanray643dCommented
So the MC has been cucked already 🤦🏻♂️. Ominous start.
Zeng Yang watched the scene with jealousy and hatred. He had already taken possession of Gu Qingya before, and it was this Yiyi who stood in the way. Yet, he wouldn't mind considering Yiyi his daughter—she was indeed cute and sensible. But to Yiyi, he was never in her sight. - Alanray644dCommented
That really doesn’t sound right? Two square metres? So small, maybe 20 or maybe 200 but not two.
Which meant that his wife's savings of 170,000 could only afford two square meters. - Alanray644dReplied to GameMage
Yeh now that I read it once more, I reckon you are right. 👍
Lowering his eyes was out of fear that Mother Ye might see the tears swirling in his eyes.detailRecently Dumped by Gold-Digger, Goddess Asked Me to Sign a Birth Consent FormUrban · Silly Little Bok Choy - Alanray645dCommented
Why is this sentence and the one above seem like he same thing? Is it a rewrite?
Turning to Lara, he asked, "I appreciate the tour. Can you tell me how much the cashout would be if I decide to rent this place?" - Alanray645dCommented
…these words were flowing…
Yes, these utterances were flowing out of their mouths, they were more brutal here than the first supermarket I entered. - Alanray645dCommented
I wouldnt use uttered so much. She spoke, she replied , she apologised etc
"We are sorry for the harassment, we misjudged you". One of the ladies uttered. - Alanray645dCommented
…I muttered to myself..
And I uttered to myself, "I'm not crazy, I'm just trying to accomplish a quest". - Alanray645dCommented
Soft drink for breakfast ? I don’t know why but that feels so wrong.. coffee, tea, milk or even juice. I guess that’s how I was brought up 😂
And with that, she walked out of my room, and I didn't waste time to begin digging in. The food was just as delicious as yesterday's own. I ate and ate until I'd emptied the plate, then I began drinking the soft drink. - Alanray645dCommented
So yeh, he happens to have access to this? Can quite easily pick it up (even with gloves) and just casually throw it. Kinda really far fetched as the country heavily controls such radioactive isotopes.
"Scared? Is this thing called a radiation ball? Is its main content cobalt-60? Did you use it to harm Mo Mo?" The more Yang Xiao spoke, the stronger the rage in his heart became, until a murderous aura filled the air. - Alanray645dReplied to SovereignOfDarc
I wondered also, I did have a bit of a look but I didn’t find anything. Guessing it is out on their nations book site as the author asks for support. Still if the actual name can be found then it would be good 👍
detailRecently Dumped by Gold-Digger, Goddess Asked Me to Sign a Birth Consent FormUrban · Silly Little Bok Choy - Alanray645dCommented
Hmm it was just mention e he transferred 500 thousand, those banks are skimming again.
Fifty thousand, it was really fifty thousand.detailRecently Dumped by Gold-Digger, Goddess Asked Me to Sign a Birth Consent FormUrban · Silly Little Bok Choy - Alanray646dCommented
Somehow I think the name just changed in Less than a few sentences
"Master, do not worry, I will exert all my effort!" assured Kong Ming.detailRecently Dumped by Gold-Digger, Goddess Asked Me to Sign a Birth Consent FormUrban · Silly Little Bok Choy