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2024-02-05 21:26

I have to say, this author has a way with words. I loved the transition between scenes. It made me want to read more. I am excited for more. Keep up the good work.

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Hello Readers! This is my final shameless review of my novel. For those wondering if this is inspired by TNE (The Novel's Extra), it is. Yes, I know that the characters of Rel and Kim Hajin are quite similar, but each has a unique personality in their respective ways. I hope that when you read this novel, you don't view it as a TNE extra spin-off but as the standalone work it was intended to be. My writing can be very descriptive and chunky at times, especially in the early stages since I was so trashy at writing but I can promise you as readers that my writing improves over time. So, if things don't sound right initially, it's just my way of putting things poorly. I also tend to go back and fix chapters in my free time, given my rather busy schedule :D Anyways, I do plan on finishing this novel. I have numerous plots and settings to explore. I think I'm only 1% of the way through as I write this, and this webnovel will take more than a few years to complete. So, please enjoy this reading journey, and feel free to express your frustrations with me, it's all part of the love I receive from you readers. also, another thing I wanted to address was after getting contracted, I just wanted to thank all of you who made this all possible I genuinely appreciate every comment and review that helped achieve this goal of mine and I'll return all of it through writing this story! It shows that the effort I put in is paying off. Also, I'm aware that people have complained about Rel being insanely weak early in the novel, and you're probably right. It was bad writing on my part, and for that, I deeply apologize! But bear with me, he will eventually live up to the expectations of a true MC!!! Happy reading! Zowji~

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