this is definitely a masterpiece in the work and eh,it's still a 5 in every category either way

Hello Readers! This is my final shameless review of my novel. For those wondering if this is inspired by TNE (The Novel's Extra), it is. Yes, I know that the characters of Rel and Kim Hajin are quite similar, but each has a unique personality in their respective ways. I hope that when you read this novel, you don't view it as a TNE extra spin-off but as the standalone work it was intended to be. My writing can be very descriptive and chunky at times, especially in the early stages since I was so trashy at writing but I can promise you as readers that my writing improves over time. So, if things don't sound right initially, it's just my way of putting things poorly. I also tend to go back and fix chapters in my free time, given my rather busy schedule :D Anyways, I do plan on finishing this novel. I have numerous plots and settings to explore. I think I'm only 1% of the way through as I write this, and this webnovel will take more than a few years to complete. So, please enjoy this reading journey, and feel free to express your frustrations with me, it's all part of the love I receive from you readers. also, another thing I wanted to address was after getting contracted, I just wanted to thank all of you who made this all possible I genuinely appreciate every comment and review that helped achieve this goal of mine and I'll return all of it through writing this story! It shows that the effort I put in is paying off. Also, I'm aware that people have complained about Rel being insanely weak early in the novel, and you're probably right. It was bad writing on my part, and for that, I deeply apologize! But bear with me, he will eventually live up to the expectations of a true MC!!! Happy reading! Zowji~

Reveal spoiler

It's not a bad novel, but it's clear that it's very similar to the rest. It's a hater gets transmigrated to the hatee's novel where he has to survive in an academy. Now there's already a problem with this novel, it's too similar compared in a the span of this platform. Even the character dynamics I'd argue is very similar to a lot of novels. There's this one kid who came from out of a blue, but is already the strongest out of them all. One girl who's a princess. Another kid who's a novel but is a rival. And then there's the mc, who wants to be an extra, in order maintain the balance of the novel. I'm not arguing that this is a terrible trope or dynamic but I think there could be more to it. However, I do really like the homogenous mixture of writing quality, and story development that propels this novel forward, making it be an enjoyable read.

I'll read this when there's at least 100 ch

I dropped it as of ch 8, for mc he is ehhh, he became super polite to the system, he kinda lacking right now and that could be for story development. but for the writing quality it goes back and forth between point of views its confusing. you have to read a bit of the paragraphs to understand who is talking. because author you use I from mc point of view then you use it to describe the secondary point of view and you change mid chapter. anyway the premise was coll set up, execution could be better imo, but yes creation is hard so if you maybe fix the back and forth pov maybe I could of read a little more.

oh my gosh honestly I am so surprised, this is so well written in the first POV. Which I know can be hard to write. I got so excited about the first chapters. eeeeee ;)

i smell potential in this novel , good writing and good narrative

It's a lot worse than I thought, sadly. I dropped after only 8 chapters, but they were quite long, and enough to understand that it's not for me. First of all, the writing is bad, which is a huge problem in a novel. I really didn't like the weapon choice. I'm not a fan of a bow, but it's still fine, but a crossbow? It's just a lamer version of the bow. And since the problem was the MC not having enough strength for the bow, then crossbow doesn't really solve the problem, especially since there were firearms available! And in the scene after, he's struggling to carry the crossbow, showing that the choice sucked. And how lame was the fight in chapter 7? Firstly, the others in his team were useless, then he arrives and acts as a tank with his crossbow? How, why? And then out of nowhere, he randomly gets a skill to slow down time, and get this: HE SHOTS 10 TO 20 THOUSANDS BEES IN 5 SECONDS. Where did he get all the bolts? Where did he get the strength and stamina to pull the crossbow 20 thousand time? How much was time slowed down by to let him shoot that many times? The entire fight just doesn't make any sense, I have no idea what the author was thinking. And finally, the novel is in hiatus, which is another issue.