The grammar holds the story back a lot even thought the plot is still not very developed at this point. If the grammar were better I feel this novel has high potential, as with all RI fanfics it is an amazing world with lots of potential for authors to explore. Hope this stroy develops on the right path, will edit my review if the grammar undergoes a change for the better.
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Okay, I try using grammerly or chatGPT, tell me on the chapter comments if it was better.
it has been fixed, if you like i recommend you read it again and tell me your opinion.
Webnovel seems to if removed the ability to edit reviews, it I would give this a solid 4/5 with the changes, however I don't know what happened, but the 3rd chapters grammar is still not fixed. It is better but past the halfway point it becomes very rough and you can only understand the general gist. Overall a much better read with only a few issues.
i will check it now, there is something wrong with webnovel editor sometimes it would not update chapter fully, still, thank you for your comment.
chapter 3 from flower description forward wasn't updated.
It's much better now, and the new chapters are also great. I wish you luck in writing and look forward to reading more!
thank you.
