Despite the spelling and grammar probprms, my main ossue comes feom just how rush, unorganised and just overall messy the story and writing. I can see a good story but man, sometimes things aren't explained, everything is just rushed and overall it feels like completely random at times. Thsir is no clear direction to the story and it feels like sometimes moat of what i am reading is a summary.
Metarln
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LIKEKhons:While your typing revise what your are typing just to make sure there are no mistakes.
Try writing a long review using a phone. You think its gonna be easy typing the keys while thinking of a proper review.
Khons:Dude. Look whose talking. Relook your review.
Garland:Try writing a long review using a phone. You think its gonna be easy typing the keys while thinking of a proper review.
Garland:Try writing a long review using a phone. You think its gonna be easy typing the keys while thinking of a proper review.