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Gishi_4187Lv141yr
2023-11-30 13:00

Sorry, bro, but I can't read past the 5th chapter. The MC has little to no IQ and gets distracted with nonsense too much for most readers to follow. as for the idea of the story... it's not bad but the MC just makes it unreadable.

Naruto: My Wives

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Thanks for the review❤️

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FightLoveSystem
FightLoveSystemAuthor

I have a request. Can you write a review in details for readers and not for me cause I now what I am writing so please write something for new readers so they can decide to read it or not.

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There was a reader who's review didnt show up so I have just edited that review for the new readers to read. Anyway thanks for clicking on my book. And now is what that reader want to express. [There were unsettling elements in the story involving inappropriate topics, and the MC's behavior was distressing. Additionally, the excessive irrelevant information and the MC's irritating attitude were off-putting. I stopped reading after seven chapters due to these issues. The reviewer, [Gabric.hu_Yeah], expressed these concerns, and I hope the adjustments enhance the overall reading experience. Happy reading!And unedited version of this review is at the end of the synopsis. Go and read that before you read the book. Cause I believe reviews are meant for the readers and not the writers.

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Falbium
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Reveal spoiler

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HydeMary
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Its fine and i cant say much right now because its only a few chaps, i dunno what will happen in the future chaps but i hope its interesting 👌

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