Gishi_4187

bro is Lin Xia a boy or a girl? The first chapter says her the entire chapter. I'm not nitpicking, just confused AF.

bro has life chi? lol I think this was a plot turn that makes no sense.

The world background is confusing AF.... how are we supposed to keep track of what's going on and factions? Why not just start a new story, not based on anything? Now I'm not saying the translation is bad or anything like that; it's a good translation. It's that the story translated is a dumpster fire.

Good stuff .... need more chapters tho.

Please fix the names.... please, my head hurts too much. T.T

Thanks for the translation! The last translation on this site dropped when it was getting good.

I think as long as you don't paywall your chaps its a compliment. GhostyXXX tends to only post a small part of the book on Webnovel; the rest of the book's chapters are placeholders for ads saying the rest of the book is on his Patreon. But his writing quality tends to be pretty good.

Please fix Torue's name because Thor is a male god's name, not a cute girl's.

I'm having a hard time reading past chapter 9 because the MC doesn't ever learn to keep his mouth shut when he's being watched, and also, Bibi Dong shouldn't know how he got the storage ring because she left before he received it. But the constant killing intent the MC receives is kinda kringe.

I agree my head hurts because of missing words and grammar.... I think I remember a few times sentences cut off and jumping to a different sentence.