Author are u serious? Mc’s mother gets raped live on the internet and u bring it up every 2 seconds… are u a sadist?

You instantly caught my attention with the title and premise. I always wanted to read a Sirzech fanfic as he was always protrayed as very strong in any fanfic and I always wonder why they choose to reincarte in Issue body instead of someone like Sirzech. and Grayfiya comes as a begger pac wife? Could it be even better!!! I give 5 star but my real review will be under this comment. five star is to support author moral and to boost rating. Good luck

I honestly enjoyed the first few chapters of this fic. It was refreshing. No forced start except maybe a few far-fetched situations, but then you go on and on every single chapter about "Oh no, his mom's video online. Of course, its justification for the MC to threaten the world. It truly started going downhill when you relied on playing on the sympathy card for the majority of the fic after that. As a reader, and I can't really call myself a proper author at this point, these kinds of things get rather tame to read, following the plot while just acting like the characters are lego building items, just to mix and match what you like and dislike without anything new being brought into the mix. -Overall, I have mixed feelings about this fic. The grammar is good, and the mc is semi-interesting, but how it is done... all I can say about that I am not a fan of slow-paced stories relying on sympathy-seeking main characters. That being said, keep up writing author :)

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I really like the story, so keep doing your best. I'll support you with my stones, though today's were already spent sadly :( . . . . . . . . .

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The writing quality is basically MTL level. The author wrote in the synopsis that he is writing and not translating this.. so he either wrote it in his native language and then used a translator or he is practicing his english. either way, if ur a native english speaker this will be a terrible experience for you.

Good story so far. I really enjoy the development of Sirzechs and hope he can get together with heroine soon and solve the pest problem. Just wish you uploaded more frequently.