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YourRaven
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2023-11-01 00:29

Author 5 Star inbound..........Update schedule is pending but I should be posting chapters once a week. said chapters could range 1-5 in said one posting

Destiny of Stars: End of Imaginary

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MakiMakiTaki
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I'm new to this app and just recently migrated from 'Fanfiction' and just got into reading some of the fanfics in Webnovel. Here are my honest thoughts on this fanfic.1. The start, more specifically the first volume was way too quick and mostly just a quick rundown in a narrative point of view. while it was slowly improving by chapters it ended before it could really get better. I hope the Author could somehow someway go back to HSR.2. The second Volume on the other hand had drastic change of writing quality in a good way. chapters were noticeably longer, we got PoV for Odin and way more Monologue's and Dialogues's.3. The Author has a very good grasp on the existing characters in the game Destiny. the interaction between The books Protagonist and characters like Cayde and Banshee seemed true to how the original creators portrayed their characters.4. I didn't really like how some entities just know about The Main Character somehow but it's understandable since the entities that know are like that universes God/Similar being. and fortunately only really mentioned at the very bare minimum, so I Could get past my dislike for it.5. liked how there were no wishes/blessings/system that the MC got (Overdone in my Opinion)6. The MC's interaction with the world around him was interesting and believable to me at least.Overall I think it was pretty good if you could get past Their earlier chapters.P.S: to author it might be better for you to just remove the HSR Volume entirely and make it a Destiny The Game Fanfic at the start. but that's just me.

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YourRaven
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The first volume is kinda rough I will rewrite them once i get a decent enough stock of future chapter.Shameless 5-Star tho hehehe

1yr
MagicianMiracle
MagicianMiracleLv4

author did u really use an AI to write this because it seems like it ._. hmmm

1yr
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