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2024-05-28 22:10

**CONTAINS SPOILERS** . . . The beginning chapters were great but after he became immortal, there was nothing really at stake for the mc it. Whenever a new character is introduced, they're used and then discarded(oofed) this has been rinse and repeat for a bit now and has made the story boring for me. Such a hands on method for every problem I think takes the essence of GoT which is politics. There is not much subtelty in his moves which makes it less enjoyable. This I feel like has gradually become a wishfulfillment fic, don't get me wrong I like OP mc but his same procedure to use a char, oof them after, makes it feel like a cultivation novel. If you wanted to make him a ruthless mc I think you should've not given him magic cause it would've been much better to see him navigate the political landscape without using this cheat, maybe just being a frey but him having so much magic definitely ruins the story.

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