FrozenEntropyLv21yr

2023-11-01 14:51

Stability of updates is incredible, to upload nearly daily at that level of quality deserves praise in of itself. Now, for what I consider most impressive. The vocabulary. I know, sounds like a weird thing to praise a story for. Every story requires a vocabulary, but this one is particularly extensive. To have unique and interesting ways to describe scenes, character interactions, reactions, and settings ensures that the flow of the story remains interesting and doesn't become a slog. In turn, what begins as a commendation for the vocabulary on display, actually turns into a commendation for the pacing and imagery, two of the most important aspects of the story. The prologue is particularly impressive in the vocabulary department, I'd like to note. And, I find it impressive that you can introduce many characters so early without it feeling overwhelming. This not just has to do with what I've mentioned already, but in the novel's ability to give a unique voice and description to each person. So, in short, I'm excited to see where this goes! Saving it to my collection.

Grief of the Endless

Entei_Arts

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13 Chs